E10: Editing Exercise – bj112295

Edited Post:

Money seems to have a big role in our society; without it not much can be done.  Money is valuable in different ways, even when the physical body of it is not obtained. In today’s society the faith is left in the government and banking system. We trust that our money is being handled in the proper manner, if not then all of us would be hiding all of money under mattress’s, or around our houses. Not really having a clue of what happens in the banks, nor how they take care of money, I always just thought money was quite simple; we either have some or we don’t. However, by being introduced to this assignment and having it compare the Yap Fei with the US and France gold trade in 1933, and the Brazilian cruzeros everything to me seemed somewhat similar. No one actually sees their money being transferred. When being paid, we do not receive a check or get paid even in cash, it’s all directly transferred to our bank accounts, and trusted in the idea that our money is safely in our accounts.

Original Copy:

Money seems to have a big role in our society; you can’t do much or get far if you don’t have any. Money is valuable in different ways, even when you don’t see it physically. In today’s society you must have faith in the government, in the banking system, that your money is being handled with in the proper manner, if not then you would be hiding all of your money under your mattress, or around your house. I never really have a clue what happens in the banks, and how they take care of your money. I always just thought money was quite simple; you either have some or you don’t, that’s it. However, by being introduced to this assignment and having it compare the Yap Fei with the US and France gold trade in 1933, and the Brazilian cruzeros all seemed somewhat similar. No one actually sees their money being transferred. When you get paid, you don’t get a check or get paid even in cash, it’s all directly transferred to your bank account, and that you just have to trust that you got more money.

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