Stone Money Rewrite – themildewmuncher7

Money is an interesting aspect to life. When asked what money is, most would suggest that it is a thing, and point to their wallet or the paper money in their hand. This is true for any civilization; we all have different ideas of money but it all serves the same purpose. However, money is not a thing, but rather a concept. We use it to value objects of desire in a clear, algorithmic way. And who dictates money always serves as quite an unpredictable variable.

Before being introduced for the first time to these fundamental ideas, I fell in the pit with all of the other conformists. I looked down at Jackson’s face and thought, “I have money right here.” That thought now lies in contention with some of the greater lies I have told myself. Milton Friedman wrote an essay entitled “The Island of Stone Money” which details a small Micronesian island in which the indigenous people use large limestone rocks as their currency. He explains that the stones can be used to purchase things of great value without having to be moved due to their immense and rather inconvenient size. At one point, when Germans were exploring their islands, their arose a situation when the Germans demanded the Yap people construct them roads. The Yap did not respond with labor as the Germans had no leverage without native currency. The Germans, as clever as they were, proceeded to mark the giant rocks with black crosses, signifying that the money was now under German control. Immediately, the Yap responded by building roads in order to regain their wealth. While this seems illogical at first, Friedman is able to draw parallels with the United States government during the Great Depression, citing that they conducted a very similar move sanctioning off gold for the French merely by labeling it (Friedman 2-4). He proved that all monetary systems are in essence the same, despite some seeming less logical on the surface.

Today, we suffer from an even more illogical economic strategy, that being online banking. We are all told we earn money and that money is placed in a bank account, but nobody ever sees it. Chana Joffe-Walt explains that the money we earned is not necessarily real, as it is never physically held, just told it exists. There is no transaction taking place that has real, tangible proof. Furthermore, in our society today, there is an unbelievable reliance on online banking and transactions. Though the money we pay on Amazon is coming from “our” bank account, what does that truly mean? Is it our money? Or is it just a promise that we’re able to trade and negotiate with at our own will?

Bitcoin deserves a notable mention here, as it gained popularity recently and is already notorious for being a questionable investment. The idea behind Bitcoin is to provide an anonymous, easy method to transfer funds, while also not being linked to a specific nationality. They present themselves, them being Bitcoin as currency universal to all. This being said, there is no clear value to them; they have no presence in the real, physical world (Reeves). Bitcoin advertise themselves as being intangible yet still capable of holding worth. Therefore, people see them as being not real, unlike paper money, such as the United States Dollar, which they think is. This leads to those people simply not valuing them as much. The concept of money, in this sense, is a curse as it maintains that currency must have a physical “value” in order for the lie that is money to work.

To us as pawns in a civilization, money is a real thing with real value. But practically speaking, it functions as a system through a series of lies and promises that may or may not be true. Your money in your bank account may have been dropped in the Atlantic Ocean, but it is still your money, and you can still withdraw it from your account.

Works Cited

Friedman, Milton. “The Island of Stone Money.” Diss. Hoover Institution, Stanford University , 1991.

Joffe-Walt, Chana . “How Fake Money Saved Brazil.” 4 Oct. 2010. 7 Sep. 2015. <;.

Reeves, Jeff. “Bitcoin Has No Place in Your – or Any – Portfolio.” MarketWatch. Livefyre, 31 Jan. 2015. Web. 07 Sept. 2015.

Glass, Ira . “The Invention of Money.” 4 Oct. 2010. 7 Sep. 2015. <

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2 Responses to Stone Money Rewrite – themildewmuncher7

  1. themildewmuncher7 says:

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  2. davidbdale says:

    P1. MM, your best, most robust claim here is that Money Is Not A Thing. When we get to it, we wonder why you bothered to start with mild platitudes like: Money is Interesting. I highly recommend that you start strong and THEN offer your anecdotal illustration. Then, of course, stay with that idea instead of moving on to other matters. You haven’t indicated at all that you will be able to persuade us money is a concept. You don’t have to prove it in one paragraph, but you do need to say in a sentence or two what you will prove.

    P2. You say again that you will demonstrate that the money in your wallet is not real (a repetition of your P1 illustration), but the rest of your paragraph does not demonstrate that at all. It does indicate that the physical objects we consider money can be “seized” or “frozen” or “released” to us by outside authorities. Right? The fei and the gold were still objects.

    P3. Here your proof begins. (There is value in P2, but it doesn’t contribute to your overall thesis.) We begin to understand what you mean by conceptual money. But Joffe-Walt’s explanation that the money is not “real” is very peculiar and not at all convincing to this reader. We grant that it’s not tangible, but if I can buy chips with it, the money is “real” enough for me. You should spend some time untangling these meanings.

    P4. This is useful material, but your use of it is odd. You’ve just maintained that we now accept that our own money does not have to be tangible to be valuable. But you want to maintain that intangibility is Bitcoin’s main drawback. Are you sure that’s it? Does its disattachment from any “backing entity” such as a nation or a national economy at all factor into our distrust of the new currency? (In other words, if vendors stop accepting my Bitcoin, who can I go to for relief?)

    P5. Your pawn analogy is peculiar. Are we being played by a chessmaster? Do you simply mean that our currency is like “play money” as if we were playing Monopoly? New ideas are welcome in a conclusion, but they need to rise organically from the preceding work and not confound readers. SYNTAX NOTE: We do not say “you” in Comp II.

    You’re a good writer showing promise. Your voice has authority and you are “handling” big concepts with skill. The ideas you propose need clarification though, which will require more than simply rephrasing a few sentences.

    Grade: As an early draft: 4E2
    Grade: If this were in your Portfolio: 9D4


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